I like how you have taken the time to research existing bottle stoppers and improve the aspect of pleasure for the user. Through the form in your appearance model it can be seen how more pleasure was applied though its curvature shape providing a sense of stability and grip. Your model skills are great. It looks so refined. It is nice to see how you have successfully able to display a more functional and contemporary bottle stopper but a way you could improve it is in it the size. Could it be smaller so it looks proportional to the bottle?
Your research into other bottle is a step most poeple fail to take, the finsh on your product is really impressive, most stoppers are so boring its quite refreshing to see such an original design. The area in which i could improve it, is prbably refining the detailing of the product and the colour, i would choose a polished metal look to suggest smoothness. But overall great job
I like the form of your bottle stopper, it looks like water or something draping down over the bottle, i think the finish is spot on and i imagine it would feel comfortable in your hand.
You've managed to use your research well. It add an unfinished element to the shape of the bottle which is intriguing to the eye and forces you to take a second glance. It looks user friendly which is also a bonus. Also hit the target market well. If you were after a finished look to the bottle and something that blends in with the original shape, I'd suggest smoothing out the lines and creating a more continuous motion which could easily be achieved with a stainless or dull chrome look. Well done!!!
I like how you have taken the time to research existing bottle stoppers and improve the aspect of pleasure for the user. Through the form in your appearance model it can be seen how more pleasure was applied though its curvature shape providing a sense of stability and grip. Your model skills are great. It looks so refined. It is nice to see how you have successfully able to display a more functional and contemporary bottle stopper but a way you could improve it is in it the size. Could it be smaller so it looks proportional to the bottle?
ReplyDeleteYour research into other bottle is a step most poeple fail to take, the finsh on your product is really impressive, most stoppers are so boring its quite refreshing to see such an original design. The area in which i could improve it, is prbably refining the detailing of the product and the colour, i would choose a polished metal look to suggest smoothness. But overall great job
ReplyDeleteI like your dsign, it is unique and different from others on the market. However, I think, the design should be more lite. Overall, good job.
ReplyDeleteI like the form of your bottle stopper, it looks like water or something draping down over the bottle, i think the finish is spot on and i imagine it would feel comfortable in your hand.
ReplyDeleteYou've managed to use your research well. It add an unfinished element to the shape of the bottle which is intriguing to the eye and forces you to take a second glance. It looks user friendly which is also a bonus. Also hit the target market well.
ReplyDeleteIf you were after a finished look to the bottle and something that blends in with the original shape, I'd suggest smoothing out the lines and creating a more continuous motion which could easily be achieved with a stainless or dull chrome look. Well done!!!